Sunday, October 19, 2014

TOW #7 (Cylce 5) - Keeping Ebola at Bay (Written)

            The New York Time’s article, Keeping Ebola at Bay, written by Brynn Anderson, effectively places the blame for the spreading of the epidemic and supports its argument for change with an appeal to ethos through factual evidence, repetition, and slicing diction.
            Keeping Ebola at Bay is an editorial that informs the audience of what is happening with the disease and what Anderson believes needs to be done in order to prevent more death. Specifically, the Center for Disease Control and Prevention has faulted so frequently that they may be the reason Ebola has became such a nauseating thought for the average citizen.
            Anderson presents overwhelming evidence at the beginning of his piece in order to establish his credibility before stating an opinion. He chronologically presents the cases that have occurred already in the United States and how they have been handled. He then states how it is connected to a mistake made by the CDC, but does not fully present his argument. This helps his readers have an idea of where Anderson wants from them without being fully aware of it.
            Repetition is also used to sway Anderson’s audience to his side. In the middle of his editorial, each paragraph begins with the Center for Disease Control and Prevention’s acronym followed by what they did wrong and should’ve happened. This organizational technique is effective as it supports the author’s purpose with a clear means of supporting his claim.
            Anderson also molds his diction in order to create his image of the C.D.C as the problem. He describes their advice as “inadequate” and a thought process as “an incredible lapse in judgment”.  The connotation brought to the C.D.C is subtle yet slicing and helps him support his claim.

            Through use of these rhetorical strategies Anderson makes a very interesting and thought provoking argument as to who was to blame for the way Ebola has affected the nation. He gives good reason for the C.D.C to revisit some of their previous decisions and effectively achieves his purpose.

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